Friday, October 12, 2012

Prologue Wolf's Point

Hey guys. Wolf here. Sorry that this is so late bieng posted this will be the only post for awhile and will only be from my characters point of view because Kat has to much on her plate know.

Prologue:Wolf

It feels strange to be back here in my hometown but this time I’m 14 and going to high school instead of 5 and in kindergarten. I stretch lightly from my window seat and look out the window on to the lawn below thinking about my best friends Dove and Jay. Well actually their names are Vivian and Ashley. My name is Cassie Blake but you can call me Wolf I’m about 4’9” and have shoulder length light brown hair that has light blue streaks in it.
 
“Cassie get down here now," my mom calls.
 
 I sit at the window for a little longer before she yells again. I push open the kitchen door and sit down in one of the wooden bar stools at the counter. The kitchen is alright looking with a leafy tiled island in the center and the  gray granite counter tops set into the wall. My mom doesn't look like she belongs in this kitchen at all with her hair pulled up into what I call the Librarian Bun and her green and gold glasses hanging from her neck. She puts a plate with scrambled eggs, two pieces of bacon, slice fried potatoes, and a piece of toast.
 
"Please tell me you aren't going to wear that today Cassie," she says looking me up and down.
 
"Why,what's wrong with it," I say scowling at her dislike of my ripped jeans and wolf shirt. "You mind repeating that I didn't quite catch it," I say after she grumbles something under her breath.
 
"I said that it was bad enough that you cut your hair short and highlighted it with that god awful color but then you dress like a boy," she says.
 
"Okay One the color is light blue and completely awesome and Two I'm a tom boy which means that I don't like dressing up like one of those freaking sluts," I shoot back.
 
"Watch your language young lady." I stick my tongue out at her when she has her back turned then start to eat my breakfast. I rise from the chair, put the plate in the sink, and walk outside. I sit on the swinging bench hanging on the porch and curl my legs up beside me as I watch people getting ready for their day. I pull my ipod from my pocket and put my headphones in to listen to music while I see if I have any new reviews for my Tokyo Mew Mew fan fiction. And I do have a new review sent to me by a kat28888 saying,
'Hey Littlespottedcat I really like your story but would like to point out some mistakes 1.) you keep spelling guardian, gaurdian. 2.) You were yelling at Rina (I think) earlier about punctuation. I laughed and found this ironic. You aren't putting a space after your periods or colons, after both of which you should. 3.) I'm noticing a ridiculous amount of run-on sentences. 4.) Be sure you're using the right "there", "they're", "their"s and "your", "you're"s. I've found (yes, I counted) over five homonym mistakes.'
 
I quickly hit reply and send her a private message saying thanks and that I would edit all my mistakes as soon as I could. "I should change my name to Wolfheart instead of that silly name but you know maybe not," I think to myself with a small smile.

Thursday, September 20, 2012

Coming Soon and my Introduction

If you are coming from My Candy Love kudos to you. I'm Wolf also known as Free2write and Littlespottedcat. If you wondering why my writing is in blue it's so you know who I am and who Kat is. Okay coming soon is a My Candy Love fan fiction written by Kat and me. We are both working on our characters point of view and soon a prologue will be up.